The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Traffic

is one of the most common, but a big

issue

in

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world, some think that

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reducing the

travel

of the

people

to office, school or any other purpose is the only way to tackle

this

problem.

First

of

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it is true that in today's time where everyone owns there own

vehical

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vehicle

,

use

it a lot for all kind of

travel

ranging from day to day to a weekend getaway.

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increase in

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of

vehicles

on road is actually causing a lot of conjunction cause

traffic

, especially during

peak

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time like

office

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or school hours,

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kind of situation is easily seen in big cities like Mumbai, Delhi, Banglore and so on where the

traffic

is the most cause developed cities give good earning opportunities which leads to increase in buying of more and more

vehicles

of all sort.

Although

the reason is true, the reduction in usage of automobiles will not decrease the

traffic

issue

. The best way to reduce the problem of conjunction

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by

vehicles

is promoting the

use

of public transportation like bus trains and so on. By telling and make the

people

aware about the advantages of using public transports and providing good facilities in terms of

travel

,

people

will surely reduce the

use

of private

vehicles

for

travel

. To add

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the above, statistics

shows

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that if one vehicle take 2

people

and there are ten

vehicles

on road going to

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place, that means there are 20

people

going to

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location and

this

increase the number of private

vehicles

used causing

traffic

, but

this

issue

will be reduced greatly if they all would prefer to

travel

by

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bus due to which there will be only one vehicle on road carrying all 20

people

's. Another example we can see is the

use

of both local trains and metro trains in places like Mumbai and Delhi, where

traffic

is very high, they are fighting

this

issue

with the help of public transportation. To summarise, according to me I strongly disagree

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the fact that reducing the need

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travel

will reduce the

traffic

issue

,

instead

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changing the mode of transportation from small private

vehicles

to big public transports will be a much better option