The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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is one of the most common, but a big

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in

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fast moving

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world, some think that

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reducing the

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of the

people

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to office, school or any other purpose is the only way to tackle

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problem.

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of

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it is true that in today's time where everyone owns there own

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vehicle

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use

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it a lot for all kind of

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ranging from day to day to a weekend getaway.

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increase in

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of

vehicles

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on road is actually causing a lot of conjunction cause

traffic

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, especially during

peak

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time like

office

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an office

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or school hours,

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kind of situation is easily seen in big cities like Mumbai, Delhi, Banglore and so on where the

traffic

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is the most cause developed cities give good earning opportunities which leads to increase in buying of more and more

vehicles

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of all sort.

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the reason is true, the reduction in usage of automobiles will not decrease the

traffic

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issue

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. The best way to reduce the problem of conjunction

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by

vehicles

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is promoting the

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of public transportation like bus trains and so on. By telling and make the

people

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aware about the advantages of using public transports and providing good facilities in terms of

travel

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,

people

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will surely reduce the

use

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of private

vehicles

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for

travel

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. To add

on

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the above, statistics

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that if one vehicle take 2

people

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and there are ten

vehicles

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on road going to

same

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the same

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place, that means there are 20

people

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going to

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location and

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increase the number of private

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used causing

traffic

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, but

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issue

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will be reduced greatly if they all would prefer to

travel

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by

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bus due to which there will be only one vehicle on road carrying all 20

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's. Another example we can see is the

use

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of both local trains and metro trains in places like Mumbai and Delhi, where

traffic

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is very high, they are fighting

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issue

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with the help of public transportation. To summarise, according to me I strongly disagree

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the fact that reducing the need

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travel

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will reduce the

traffic

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issue

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instead

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changing the mode of transportation from small private

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to big public transports will be a much better option