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the piechart below shows diagrams waste products are dealt with three countries

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the chart compares Korea,
Sweden
 and the United Kingdom in the methods of harmful
misuse
 treatment . it is clear that a majority of dangerous
misuse
 commodities are underground in
UK
,
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 and
Sweden
, but most
misuse
 materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled . while recycling is not used in the
UK
 to reduce
misuse
 . to alternative waves are used in
this
 country . underground is the most popular method of the
misuse
 disposal of diagrams
misuse
 materials in the
UK
 and
Sweden
 ,for a massive 82% and overall respectively .
However
, the main way to reduce the
misuse
 of
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 is recycling in the republic of at , nearly 70%. while
misuse
 is treated in a similar way in
Sweden
,recycling role in the disposable brand in the united kingdom. the
third
 most used method of
misuse
 treatment in
Sweden
 and Korea considerably a full 20% and 9 % respectively .
misuse
 is burned in the
UK
 dangerous
misuse
 output are reduced by using chemical and dumping at sea in the
Uk
 8%. on the other
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 they note the usable way in the remaining nation.
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