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It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is undeniable that schools play an essential role to educate
students
 but there is still an argument that
students
 should be taught about physical
matters
 more than
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academic instruction.
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 I agree with the idea of educating practical
matters
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 helpful for them. In
this
 highly competitive education, some schools have still encouraged their
students
 to learn more and more subjects because if they gain lots of knowledge they will be ready to encounter harder lessons in the future
such
 as extreme competition in the universities.
However
, these theories that
students
 have learnt from classrooms might be impractical if they lack practical
skills
 entering the real world. There are lots of modern institutions that support their pupils to learn more practical
matters
 rather than too much concentration in
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 education.
As a result
 of learning house management, interpersonal
skills
 and how to work effectively , not only
students
 could use these to handle any problems, but they
also
 have broader
skills
 to survive in
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wider society. In my point of view, some compulsory subjects, those
skills
 currently have not been able to be used in their real life.
For instance
, in Thailand, A majority of schools provide much more helpless subjects for their
students
 but practically many children lack
of
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crucial
skills
 outside school. To conclude, I strongly agree that
students
 should be guided by physical
matters
 that are so advantageous facing
this
 modern world rather than learning too academic of
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