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Although some people believe that children should pursue employment, others think that students should study further education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The given bar chart and table provide information on the export revenue of a particular country in six different industries, and how these revenues have changed from 2015 to 2016. Overall, profits of all of these sectors, apart from gems and jewellery, increased, with textiles generating more earnings by the end of the period given. In the years 2015 and 2016, petroleum products and engineered goods were the country’s principal exports.
However
, revenues from both categories had increased by 2016, the former by 3 per
cent
 and the latter by 8.5 per
cent
, reaching a peak of just over 60
billion
. In 2016, textiles showed significant growth, generating almost half as much income as petroleum products in the same year, at around $30
billion
. Turning to agriculture,
this
 category experienced a slight increase of just under 1 per
cent
, providing almost the same earnings as that of in the textiles sector in 2016 ($30
billion
). The only decrease in the country’s export sales occurred in the gems and jewellery industry, which was the
third
-highest major export in both years, with the market experiencing a decline of 5.18 per
cent
 to about $40
billion
 over a year.
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