Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
At present
people
are divided into two part
Fix the agreement mistake
parts
of
in Change preposition
apply
term
of dependent on each other. Many are believe we are dependent on each other Fix the agreement mistake
terms
on the other hand
some people
think we are more independent. This
essay will explore both sides of this
term.Firstly
, i
will discuss why we are still now Change the capitalization
I
depedent
on each other and Correct your spelling
dependent
secondly
, some independent things
discussion.
In socity
Correct your spelling
society
humans
are very much dependent on many natural and artificial elements. it is so common in this
era. There are lots of reasons why ethnic
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the ethnic
group
are dependent. Fix the agreement mistake
groups
First
of all, they are not able to do everything. Like some countries produce vegetable and fruits in a big number and they heve
enough for survive so that these country export these kinds of Correct your spelling
have
things
. They import fruits and vegetable
because they are unable Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
Correct your spelling
to
ti
produce. Correct your spelling
to
Also
we get various kinds of help from Add a comma
,Also
other human
. Change the wording
another human
other humans
For instance
, fisherman
catch the fish and they sold it on market, we bought it Fix the agreement mistake
fishermen
by
money. By doing Change preposition
for
this kinds
of Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
things
both groups altemately
get the Correct your spelling
ultimately
alternately
benifit
. Money is Correct your spelling
benefit
imprtant
for Correct your spelling
important
fisherman
and fish is necessary for other Fix the agreement mistake
fishermen
profession
Replace the word
professional
people
.
On the other hand
, a good number of people
believe nowdays
Correct the word
nowadays
humans
are more independent. It is also
true for many examples. At this
moment, technology is a big factor of
our daily life. We did lots of work Change preposition
in
by
Change preposition
on
this
. Even some technology works like a human. Such
as Roboot
. Correct your spelling
Robot
Roboot
can Correct your spelling
Robot
Robert
Reboot
did
some particular work like Change the verb form
do
humans
. In term
of food, Fix the agreement mistake
terms
people
are able to produce vegetable
and fruits by using other countries soil. Another Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
things
is at present Replace the adjective
thing
people
are more self dependent
and powerful for some technology. As well as, Add a hyphen
self-dependent
majority
of governments in Correct article usage
the majority
world
give free access and permission for any work or travel.Add an article
the world
For example
, few
years ago economically Change the article
a few
humans
are very much dependent on rich people
but nowdays
Correct the word
nowadays
Correct your spelling
they
the
do job and earn money Correct your spelling
they
freedomly
.
In conclusion, in Correct your spelling
freedom
this
stage of gllobalaization
sometimes Correct your spelling
globalization
people
dependent
on Add a missing verb
are dependent
large
number of sources which source handle by Change the article
a large
the large
people
, at the same time, there is a lots
of Change the noun form
lot
sector
that which are totally free. Change to a plural noun
sectors
Although
, i
think at present Change the capitalization
I
people
are more dependent.Submitted by rasel_beck on
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