Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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are divided into two

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in

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of dependent on each other. Many are believe we are dependent on each other

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some

people

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think we are more independent.

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essay will explore both sides of

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term.

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will discuss why we are still now

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dependent

on each other and

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, some independent

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discussion. In

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society

humans

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are very much dependent on many natural and artificial elements. it is so common in

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era. There are lots of reasons why

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are dependent.

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of all, they are not able to do everything. Like some countries produce vegetable and fruits in a big number and they

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have

enough for survive so that these country export these kinds of

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. They import fruits and

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because they are unable

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produce.

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we get various kinds of help from

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another human

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.

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fisherman

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fishermen

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catch the fish and they sold it on market, we bought it

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money. By doing

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this kinds

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of

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both groups

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ultimately

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get the

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benefit

. Money is

imprtant

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important

for

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and fish is necessary for other

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people

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.

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, a good number of

people

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believe

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humans

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are more independent. It is

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true for many examples. At

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moment, technology is a big factor

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our daily life. We did lots of work

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. Even some technology works like a human.

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as

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.

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some particular work like

humans

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of food,

people

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are able to produce

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and fruits by using other countries soil. Another

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things

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is at present

people

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are more

self dependent

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and powerful for some technology. As well as,

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of governments in

world

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give free access and permission for any work or travel.

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years ago economically

humans

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are very much dependent on rich

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but

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they

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the

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do job and earn money

freedomly

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freedom

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stage of

gllobalaization

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globalization

sometimes

people

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dependent

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on

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number of sources which source handle by

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, at the same time, there is a

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of

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that which are totally free.

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,

i

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think at present

people

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are more dependent.