The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the following charts illustrate the ownership of electrical appliances and households.
overall
, the horizontal indicates the year
between 1920 and 2019 for both the charts, whereas
vertical electrical appliance shows household on 0 to 100% and other chart housework states the duration hours from 0 to 60.
to begin
with, the washing machine
had taken upper
hand at 40%, the Correct article usage
the upper
vacuum
cleaners took 30% and refrigerator
pointed from Correct article usage
the refrigerator
the
0% in the Correct article usage
apply
year
1920. in 1940, the vacuum
cleaner was
witnessed a phenomenal increase with around 55% ahead Unnecessary verb
apply
the
washing Change preposition
of the
machine
reached 60%, but refrigerator
shows steady inclined growth at 50%. the Correct article usage
the refrigerator
next
four decades depict the refrigerator touched the highest point in 1980, whereas
vacuum
Correct article usage
the vacuum
cleaner
at 90%, but the washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
had
fluctuated and reached 70% in 2000. in Unnecessary verb
apply
last
2 decades, remain constant value for both washing Correct article usage
the last
machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
vacuum
cleaner
at 100% and followed by washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
ended Fix the agreement mistake
machines
with
75%. in the household chart, Change preposition
at
initially
started with
Change preposition
at
60hour
in 1920 and later declined for Correct your spelling
60 hours
next
4 decades Correct article usage
the next
whereas
in the year
1960 to 2019. slight fall in the house working hour to 10%. the chart clearly shows that the increase in the year
1920 to 1980 in electrical appliances affected the housework hours due to
this
decline in the year
between 1980 and 2019 respectively.Submitted by mariathangaraj4 on
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