In some countries, changes in the amount of rainfall have led to a serious shortage of water and governments are now under pressure to find solutions that address this problem. What are some of the problems that lack of water causes and what can be done to save water in the future?

It is well-known from public sources that some countries experience a lack of
water
due to the
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amount of rain and authority has to find a decision for
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climate change and the measures that can be taken in order to address
this
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of all,
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problem
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arrived
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climate change. There are so many researches these days that argue a
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growth. The average temperature increased significantly
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causes drought in many countries.
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, in my
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we have never experienced
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conditions in the summer season before recent few years.
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, I consider that in tropical countries the situation might be worse and due to the hot weather
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they have to address the
problem
of a serious shortage of
water
. Another case that might
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reason is a location of a country. It might not have its rivers or lakes where
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water
can be collected.
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, Malta is a country
that is
located on a tiny island
that is
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the sea and,
as a result
, they experience a lack of
water
. In my opinion, the solution that might be taken by the government to address
this
issue
is to
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construct
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some equipment and storages that can collect
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and
then
filter
water
in order to supply to a consumer. In conclusion, the
problem
of lack of pure
water
is getting more popular nowadays and the
issue
has to be solved
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climate change is a global challenge that
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requires
more attention than its country's authority.
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