Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local habitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that nowadays, visitors from other
countries
have risen significantly. Some people
expect that it will affect the local dwellings and also
the environmental resources
, while others think that it is advantageous for visited countries
. In the following paragraphs, both viewpoints will be described in detail.
On the one hand, it will have several shortcomings if tourists visit in a dramatic increment such
as deteriorating of the original traditions and squander host resources
. To be more precise, it is no argument that when tourist
arrived in other Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
countries
, they will behave relatively as same as in their own countries
. For instance
, they still speak with other local people
in their native languages, and they also
bring their cutting-edge technology to utilize in those countries
and the old feelings of local people
including their traditions were disappearing gradually. Another drawback is that there was overusing in local resources
as the result of the huge increment of international visitors that use a great deal of
native Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
plenty of
resources
that makes the dwellers becoming a shortage of their own resources
.
On the other hand
, they can bring the advantage to those countries
as well. First
of all, they spend a large quantity of money on other countries
. In other words
, they can circulate their money to do various benefits in many aspects in countries
. Last
but not least, those countries
will become well-known because their tourist attractions are astonished in their perspective and the tourists will spread the information to their acquaintances.
Taking everything into consideration, rising tourism has many disadvantages to local people
by diminishing their traditions and using many local resources
. However
, they will bring a great of money to those countries
as well.Submitted by palmynawa on
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