Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local habitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that nowadays, visitors from other
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have risen significantly. Some
people
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expect that it will affect the local dwellings and
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the environmental
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, while others think that it is advantageous for visited
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. In the following paragraphs, both viewpoints will be described in detail. On the one hand, it will have several shortcomings if tourists visit in a dramatic increment
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as deteriorating of the original traditions and squander host
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. To be more precise, it is no argument that when
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arrived in other
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, they will behave relatively as same as in their own
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, they still speak with other local
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in their native languages, and they
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bring their cutting-edge technology to utilize in those
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and the old feelings of local
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including their traditions were disappearing gradually. Another drawback is that there was overusing in local
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as the result of the huge increment of international visitors that use
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native
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that makes the dwellers becoming a shortage of their own
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, they can bring the advantage to those
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as well.
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of all, they spend a large quantity of money on other
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, they can circulate their money to do various benefits in many aspects in
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but not least, those
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will become well-known because their tourist attractions are astonished in their perspective and the tourists will spread the information to their acquaintances. Taking everything into consideration, rising tourism has many disadvantages to local
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by diminishing their traditions and using many local
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.
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, they will bring a great of money to those
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as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Stimulating
  • Overdevelopment
  • Cultural exchange
  • Environmental degradation
  • Infrastructure
  • Commercialized
  • Conservation efforts
  • Eco-tourism
  • Seasonal fluctuations
  • Cost of living
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