Your landlord has increased the amount of rent you pay every month and you don’t find it appropriate. Write a letter to the landlord and in your letter,

Dear

Mr.

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Chopra, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am going through a bad phase due to the pandemic and I do not consider

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increase in monthly rent as a reasonable thing, at least in

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tough time. Please note that due to bad market conditions, my employer reduced my salary by 25 % and I was about to request you to slash the rent down a bit, as I am facing financial issues. It is unfair as it is violating the terms of

agreement

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, as it was supposed to get surged after 2 months .

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, it was agreed between us that we would increase it by 10 % annually, whereas you have increased it by 20%. I am living here peacefully as a decent tenant

from

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for

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last

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3 years and have never faced any trouble and I was not expecting that at all. It is my sincere request to please keep it

same

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the same

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at least for the fixed tenure and increase it by the amount as per the contract

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otherwise

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I have to look for another property in the vicinity. Yours faithfully Jatin Kochar

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Aug 28, 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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192 words

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