In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the main

issue

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in our actual world are communities who undergoes a

lack

of

food

. Whereas,

the

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agriculture in others

coutries

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countries

has known many advances.

This

essay intends to find the causes of

this

situation and provides some solutions to tackle

this

problem.

Firstly

,the main causes might be the poverty of certain lands and the

lack

of help by others governments. Indeed, communities without money often struggle to buy some

food

.

For instance

, in Africa or Asia, many societies have an extremely low GDP which means that they

have

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not all the conveniences.

Then

, finding clear water to drink might be very difficult when there is

absolutly

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absolutely

none

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no

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supermaket

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supermarket

and all rivers are polluted.

Nonetheless

, being able to develop

an

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agriculture would be

benefic

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for all these places,but lacking money, they can not

allowed

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themselves to buy modern machines or a meadow.

Moreover

, we

shoud

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should

notice that in Africa,

for example

,

huge

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problem of

lack

of water are

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still

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sill

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still

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existing and

that is

not straightforward to deal with that. On the other side, a solution would be that

wheathier

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whether

wealthier

weather

sociaties

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societies

provide some help. Indeed, we could try to give more

food

to these countries.

For example

,

instead

of saying that we do not have enough

lands

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on earth to feed everyone in meat, reducing the amount of Europeans and Americans daily consumption of beef or chicken, and replaced these farms

by

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cereal crops could give largely enough

food

for all the population on earth.

Then

, trying to build

accomodations

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accommodations

if population are asking for or organising

humanitary

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humanitarian

humanity

projects for societies who needs that would be a good start. To conclude, high poverty is one of the

problem

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on

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this

world, it might happen after

war

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a war

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or just with a

lack

of a structured system. Anyway, to avoid

this

, people who have money should help and many meat

industry

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industries

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could be transformed

in

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cereal crops to provide more

food

for everyone.

Hence

, we could find that in the future, balance will start to come between rich and poor but nothing is certain.