In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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One of the main
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in our actual world are communities who undergoes a
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of
food
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. Whereas,
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agriculture in others
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countries
has known many advances.
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situation and provides some solutions to tackle
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problem.
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,the main causes might be the poverty of certain lands and the
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of help by others governments. Indeed, communities without money often struggle to buy some
food
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.
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, in Africa or Asia, many societies have an extremely low GDP which means that they
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not all the conveniences.
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, finding clear water to drink might be very difficult when there is
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supermaket
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supermarket
and all rivers are polluted.
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, being able to develop
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agriculture would be
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for all these places,but lacking money, they can not
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themselves to buy modern machines or a meadow.
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, we
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notice that in Africa,
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,
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problem of
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of water are
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existing and
that is
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not straightforward to deal with that. On the other side, a solution would be that
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whether
wealthier
weather
sociaties
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societies
provide some help. Indeed, we could try to give more
food
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to these countries.
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,
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of saying that we do not have enough
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on earth to feed everyone in meat, reducing the amount of Europeans and Americans daily consumption of beef or chicken, and replaced these farms
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cereal crops could give largely enough
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for all the population on earth.
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, trying to build
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accommodations
if population are asking for or organising
humanitary
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humanitarian
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projects for societies who needs that would be a good start. To conclude, high poverty is one of the
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this
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world, it might happen after
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or just with a
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of a structured system. Anyway, to avoid
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, people who have money should help and many meat
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could be transformed
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cereal crops to provide more
food
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for everyone.
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, we could find that in the future, balance will start to come between rich and poor but nothing is certain.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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