Some parents say that children should play individually more than in a group. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and include your own opinion.

Nowadays, play is a crucial element for

children

in their childhood

besides

there are manifold kinds of its which can divide into the sole person and cooperative with

others

. I personally believe that

this

statement has both benefits and drawbacks but from my

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I think it has more cons than pros in

such

alternatives. On the one hand, the

children

are directly influenced by their adults who passed many experiences through their whole life and they would teach their

children

in what they think. Playing individually makes many disadvantages like

firstly

, the

children

will not know how to be with other people or friends in the same society.

Secondly

, they will not have a sense of collectivity and togetherness

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are significant keys to be able in community.

Lastly

, the

children

can be loneliness which is a negative mood and

this

could impact the entire of their lives.

For example

, the

children

who were taught to be alone since their childhood , when they grow up it has more opportunities to display bad behaviours to friends as well as colleagues.

Thus

, being alone can make many negative sides in childhood as well as

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.

On the other hand

, there are some positive sides of sole playing, the

first

reason is the youth can ensure any problem with themselves easily since they only have always been in a one. Another reason is they can obviously decision something which does not want to wait for the

others

. To illustrate when they grow up to adolescence they can manage the difficulties better than individuals who always received help from

others

.

Therefore

, playing individually

also

has some good points as well. In conclusion, both of these behaviours have a large number of differences ,

however

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the disadvantages are important points to self and

others

in living in the world.

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, some advantages can affect

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life too. For manifold reasons, it is better to play in a group with

others

than playing alone.