Some parents say that children should play individually more than in a group. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and include your own opinion.

Nowadays, play is a crucial element for

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in their childhood

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there are manifold kinds of its which can divide into the sole person and cooperative with

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. I personally believe that

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statement has both benefits and drawbacks but from my

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I think it has more cons than pros in

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alternatives. On the one hand, the

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are directly influenced by their adults who passed many experiences through their whole life and they would teach their

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in what they think. Playing individually makes many disadvantages like

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, the

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will not know how to be with other people or friends in the same society.

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, they will not have a sense of collectivity and togetherness

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are significant keys to be able in community.

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, the

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can be loneliness which is a negative mood and

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could impact the entire of their lives.

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, the

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who were taught to be alone since their childhood , when they grow up it has more opportunities to display bad behaviours to friends as well as colleagues.

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, being alone can make many negative sides in childhood as well as

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.

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, there are some positive sides of sole playing, the

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reason is the youth can ensure any problem with themselves easily since they only have always been in a one. Another reason is they can obviously decision something which does not want to wait for the

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. To illustrate when they grow up to adolescence they can manage the difficulties better than individuals who always received help from

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.

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, playing individually

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has some good points as well. In conclusion, both of these behaviours have a large number of differences ,

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the disadvantages are important points to self and

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in living in the world.

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, some advantages can affect

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life too. For manifold reasons, it is better to play in a group with

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than playing alone.