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Nowadays parents are sending their children on trips abroad for educational purposes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#parents #children #trips #purposes
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 time, many parents want to send their
children
go
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trips
 abroad for education. So, they are sending their
children
 it
nice
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 for them or not. That well for sending
children
 go to
trips
abord
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,
this
 day the way takes
children
 for education in another country it can develop many things in their life. The example,
children
 can improve in their languages. If they go learn
trips
abord
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 in short-time, some people
maybe
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 language cannot more improve but they can get the experience in their life
such
 as there are
new
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a new
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 friend and they can learn about
culture
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the culture
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 and
traditional
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 of that country or other things it can get when
children
 go there. There are some
children
have
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force
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 by their parents.
This
 reason maybe can impact
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these
children
such
 as
children
 can hate that trip or they become
introvert
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 when they go
another
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 country because it presses them. But
my
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 opinion their parent should not to fore
children
 who should
listen
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 their
children
 that they want to go, aren’t them? In my opinion,
parent
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parents
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 send
children
to
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on
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trips
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abroad
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abord
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aboard
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 for education. It
nice
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 for them because they
van
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can
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 open the new world and there are new experiences but in the sending
children
,
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the parent
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parent
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parents
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 should focus
their
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they're
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decided
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 to go.
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