Some people think it is important to spend a lot of money on a wedding celebration, while others disagree. Describe both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that wedding
day
is one of the most special
day
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in our lives. Some people are willing to
spent
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a fortune on a wedding celebration, while others are way more humble.
This
essay will discuss both
point
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of
views
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and my opinion on
this
issue. On the one hand, it is not difficult to share the opinion with those, who argue that wedding
day
is only
one time
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life event and it
deservers
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deserves
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to be celebrated properly. We should
also
consider the fact, that in some cultures it is vital to present a family in the best way possible. It would be considered rude to
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money on
this
important
day
.
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