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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 advanced world due to the proliferation in technology, it supplanted many handwriting jobs with its advanced gadgets like computer laptops. while some people believe due to the availability of
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 digital advances , there is no need to teach juveniles about writing skills , but I oppose
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 view for the physical growth of the students it is necessary for them to learn writing skills. to commence with,
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 of all for the academic and physical expansion, it is imperative for children to learn a variety of linguistic skills. as in , schools they have to make notes every day if they will have no proper knowledge of how to hold a pencil, it will lead to lack of in confidence in them,resulting pupils will not go to the school ,
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 it will affect their future . to illustrate , many students in schools face difficulty while put down on copies ,as it affects their marks,
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 it will directly cause some mental disaster for them.so, the better they can write in school , the more they gain confidence , resulting they will have more friends with whom they can share their emotion.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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