some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by the government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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both views are described including my opinion

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, To maintain culture and for beautification of society. artists play a vital in

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should support their endeavours. In our communities people consider

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as a hobby ,not as a passion because as their less validity of jobs along with money as a consequences rulers should take initiative and start to arrange vacancies for them and make essential subject in schools.

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and of course their earing.

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everyone has enough money to spend on flicks no one wants to buy a ticket for their exhibitions and

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, By use of technology and by connecting with some social activists. They can take their place and as well as earn money.

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of social media where they can post their creativity and develop their own shop without any huge investment

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there are lots of organizations through which generation providing help for needy ones, it could be argued that for

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they require artists to join volunteers. For an instance, There are a lot

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who worked for the welfare of offspring for them crafters always require to develop their interset In my opinion,

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that there should be an approach. where they can lead without any obstruction but nowadays, to show your talents in the front of

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can be done by themselves with help of internet. In conclusion, It is true to develop a country

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true that to for the beautification of the

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or to pass our history for the new generation, the designer plays a vital role. So that either governments or some other profitable and non-profitable organization should enlight their talents