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write an essay to describe Hanoi city in 250 words

#hanoi #city
Hanoi
 is the capital
city
 of Vietnam, where has many beautiful scenes and friendly
people
. It is the
second largest
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city
 in the
countries
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, located on the right bank of the Red River. It has the weather
of
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 northern Vietnam. In the summer, it
usually
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is usually
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 hot and rain a lot but in the winter it’s cold and very dry.
Hanoi
also
have
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 many famous
place
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places
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such
 as the sword lake, the temple of literature ,etc.
Hanoi
 is more than 1000 years old, which is really rare in the world. Despite the age,
hanoi
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Hanoi
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 is a busy and
noise
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city
.
Everyday
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 there
maybe
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may be
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thousand
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 or millions of
vehicle
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vehicles
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 with many historical
place
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places
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 like
vietnam
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Vietnam
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 old town which
located
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 in the Thang Long suburbs. In
this
 place, you can find thousand of stress
food
store
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stores
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 with
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a variety
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variety
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various
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of kind
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kind
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 of
food
.
people
 in
hanoi
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Hanoi
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city
 are very friendly and funny. They often invite foreign travellers
eat
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 their
food
 or souvenir gift for friends and family.In
night
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, the
city
look
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looks
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 fantastic and crowded especially in
weekend
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the weekend
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 when
people
 want to hang out with their friend and family
to night
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tonight
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 market or simply just walk and enjoy the view of the beautiful
city
. You can
also
 drink a cup of ice tea or eating delicious street
food
 from the
fast
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food
 truck. In conclusion,
Hanoi
 is a beautiful and historical
city
 with friendly
people
 and great scenes.
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I'm
In
Im
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isIm
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 very proud because
im
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I'm
 a
hanoian
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Hanoian
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.
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