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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.

#technology #people #cell #phone #security #cameras #cases
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recently
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 years, by developing
of
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technology, there are
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 methods to manage each person’s daily life without them recognize it. These improvements may have some drawbacks
however
 I strongly believe they have more positive impacts.
First
 of all, technology updates security systems by boosting cameras
therefore
, they can survive a lot of human’s
live
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. By installing these hidden cameras in public areas which
names
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 CCTV, they give
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 hand to detectives and polices in order to catch robbers and murders by playing back the recorded videos from crime scenes and easily catch thieves.
For instance
, in South Korea, there is a rule to install CCTV in every public
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 like streets, cafes, shopping malls which they put a key beside them to press when a person feels in danger and alert the area’s police station, as can be
seen
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this
 invention makes South Korea the top ten safest place in the world.
On the other hand
, many older people believe the rising side of technology infringement on their personal freedoms more than past. They think
this
 makes them feel uncomfortable and insecure while they are on phone and their voice calls are recorded by
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Thus
, they cannot talk freely about political issues nor speak up their minds
loud
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.
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, they want to stop
technologies
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 improvement in order to not feel chased and controlled. In conclusion, despite
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several drawbacks of science improvements and losing privacy in public lives, all
this
 digital monitoring can rule out countries and make humans
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feel secure in their daily lives in public. I definitely trust these security systems.
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