It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a break down in family relationships and communication. (To what extent do you agree)

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Hi Emma, I hope you’re doing well in Korea! I’m just writing

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email to say thank you for the wonderful photos which we took together

last

month in Seoul, Korea, and the amazing trip

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Busan. I really like the one which your dad

brough

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us to the ski mountain. I have received these photos

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week by express Korea post. I’m so sorry that I didn’t let you know early due to my busy time. Having said that, I need to complete my IELTS exam as soon as possible. At the same time, I had to attend the internship as well.

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made me so crazy! One more thing that I want to say is let’s come to Thailand to visit my hometown. I am very welcome you and your family. Currently, I have available rooms for you guys, and you don’t need to pay for the hotel. I hope you will think about it and let me know whether you come or not. Just get back to me when you can, No rush! Best wishes, Mookie

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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