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advantages and disadvantages of living in small communities

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Dear
Mrs.
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 Shelton, I am writing
this
 email to extend to you an invitation to the conference on Friday, 23 September 2021 at 2 pm which was presented by our committee
in
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 the topic, green areas in the community.
This
 event will be held at
PWC
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 building, Auckland city centre.
Firstly
, I would like to introduce my committee. There are seven members
with
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 different nationalities. Currently, we are based in Auckland and are the leader of
this
 coming meeting. The reason
of
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 organizing
this
 event is to provide both training and knowledge regarding
to maintain
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green
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a green
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 environment in each community.
This
 method will bring an excellent result to you. The presentation will be displayed by three
of
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scientists. We hope everyone will gain a lot of
experiences
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 here. You are formally invited to attend the meeting. Please see the invitation card which was attached to
this
 email. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours Sincerely, Mookie
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