The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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The three given
pie
charts illustrate the amount of
Sodium
, Saturated fat, and added
sugar
consumed by the average American in various meals. The
sodium
pie
chart demonstrates that breakfast comprises 14% of the daily
sodium
intake
,
snacks
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and snacks
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also
comprise 14% of
daily
Correct article usage
the daily
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sodium
intake
.
In contrast
,
dinner
encompasses 29% of the daily
sodium
intake
, and the maximum
sodium
intake
is during
dinner
, at 43%. Coming to the
second
pie
chart, which comprises saturated fat
intake
, breakfast has the least saturated fat at 16%, followed by
snacks
at 21%, which is
lead
Wrong verb form
led
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by
saturated
Correct article usage
the saturated
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fat
intake
of lunch at 26%, and
most
Correct article usage
the most
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saturated fat
intake
appears to be whilst having
dinner
, at 37%. The
third
pie
chart indicates daily
sugar
intake
, for which breakfast again has the most negligible
sugar
intake
at 16%, followed by lunch at 19%,
dinner
at 23%, and
then
snacks
contain
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containing
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the most
sugar
at a whopping 42% of the daily
intake
. As inferred by the
pie
charts,
dinner
is the unhealthiest meal comprising
most
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the most
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sodium
and saturated fat,
whereas
snacks
are the most calorie-filled meal, comprising 42%
sugar
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, sodium, sugar, intake, snacks, dinner with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutrients
  • Unhealthy
  • Daily intake
  • Percentage
  • Carbohydrates
  • Fats
  • Proteins
  • Meals
  • Balanced diet
  • Consumption
  • Excess
  • Health implications
  • Obesity
  • Diabetes
  • Heart disease
  • Convenience foods
  • Fast foods
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Healthy eating habits
  • Dietary recommendations
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