The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The three given

pie

charts illustrate the amount of

Sodium

, Saturated fat, and added

sugar

consumed by the average American in various meals. The

sodium

pie

chart demonstrates that breakfast comprises 14% of the daily

sodium

intake

snacks

Correct word choice

and snacks

show examples

also

comprise 14% of

daily

Correct article usage

the daily

show examples

sodium

intake

In contrast

dinner

encompasses 29% of the daily

sodium

intake

, and the maximum

sodium

intake

is during

dinner

, at 43%. Coming to the

second

pie

chart, which comprises saturated fat

intake

, breakfast has the least saturated fat at 16%, followed by

snacks

at 21%, which is

lead

Wrong verb form

led

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saturated

Correct article usage

the saturated

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fat

intake

of lunch at 26%, and

most

Correct article usage

the most

show examples

saturated fat

intake

appears to be whilst having

dinner

, at 37%. The

third

pie

chart indicates daily

sugar

intake

, for which breakfast again has the most negligible

sugar

intake

at 16%, followed by lunch at 19%,

dinner

at 23%, and

then

snacks

contain

Wrong verb form

containing

show examples

the most

sugar

at a whopping 42% of the daily

intake

. As inferred by the

pie

charts,

dinner

is the unhealthiest meal comprising

most

Correct article usage

the most

show examples

sodium

and saturated fat,

whereas

snacks

are the most calorie-filled meal, comprising 42%

sugar

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Clear and correct grammar

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals, of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now , and how it will look after redevelopment .

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