Life today is extremely stressful for most people.Do you agree?

Life nowadays is more stressful and more difficult than in the past since they have changed the situations of living , the expectations of ego and

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the requirements in the workplaces.

To begin

with, the workplaces these days are very different since they are extremely demanding in terms of finding a job because you must have finished your degree and after ,that it would be profitable to have a master on

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and obviously have 2 foreign languages for your benefit .

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if you have financial problems , you are going to work two different jobs to cover the expenses yet

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tremendously exhausted due to ten to twelve working hours per day without time to do something different, like a hobby or hanging out with friends or even for rest and at

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want to mention the outstandingly low salary .

On the other hand

, I am going to refer to the theme of the family . So, if you have a family makes things harder since you will have no time to see them and

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to drive you away from them . As

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you will have enough responsibilities and in the case that you will not have the financial ability to buy the essential things for them , those situations are going to make you unhappier ,depressed with anxiety and pessimist for the immediate future .

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I would like to focus on that , if these things happen constantly may cause health problems.

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one , the pace of life is overly hard especially for the people who live in the big cities . One of the factors that have caused these problems is work pressure and the rhythm of the day . The business competition is getting tougher and tougher these days and it has increased dramatically the workload .

Besides

that , the traffic , the noise of the city , the tall buildings , the distance from your house to your job and the fear of criminality has contributed as well . To sum up , the result of all of

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is that the people work in order to live and is the worst thing that ever happened . Despite the job , the pressure and all the factors , the people should be optimistic , positive , energetic in every situation .