Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. What extent do you agree?

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the opinion, that the gap between those, who earn a lot of money and those who work for the lowest salary should be reduced. I agree with
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essay I would like to share my point of view. On the one hand, high-income earners contribute to the economic development of the country, which should not be forgotten. In England,
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, the income tax might reach 40% of the total income of
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wealthy individuals.
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, people who earn large sums of money financially support lower-income earners. Without the gap between the rich and the poor,
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, the majority of wealthy people worked really hard to become
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Income disparity
  • Equitable
  • Socio-economic groups
  • Wage gap
  • Morale
  • Productivity
  • Social cohesion
  • Public health outcomes
  • Incentivize
  • Innovation
  • Economic growth
  • Skill level
  • Expertise
  • Competitiveness
  • Market forces
  • Supply-and-demand dynamics
  • Artificial adjustments
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