Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. What extent do you agree?

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the opinion, that the gap between those, who earn a lot of money and those who work for the lowest salary should be reduced. I agree with

this

statement only partly, in

this

essay I would like to share my point of view. On the one hand, high-income earners contribute to the economic development of the country, which should not be forgotten. In England,

for instance

, the income tax might reach 40% of the total income of

the

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wealthy individuals.

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put it

in other words

, people who earn large sums of money financially support lower-income earners. Without the gap between the rich and the poor,

this

would not be possible.

On the other hand

, the majority of wealthy people worked really hard to become

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successful

in the world of business.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

136 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Income disparity
Equitable
Socio-economic groups
Wage gap
Morale
Productivity
Social cohesion
Public health outcomes
Incentivize
Innovation
Economic growth
Skill level
Expertise
Competitiveness
Market forces
Supply-and-demand dynamics
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Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid job and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. What extent do you agree?

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