Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level off sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's world, the competition among many manufactured companies which produces food and drink
products
are increasing day by day. Even many organisations are adding high levels of
sugar
for improving the tastes of those
items
. It is believed by some
people
that the cost of sugary
products
should be increased so that
people
will consume less
sugar
in the future. In my opinion, I partially agree with
this
statement.
Although
increasing the cost of sugary
products
will help for reducing the consumption level, it is not the only way to encourage
people
to consume less
sugar
. To commence with, escalating the expense of sugary
products
will encourage
people
to eat less
sugar
which resulted in reducing
health
problems.
For example
, in the world, many sugary
products
now contain carbohydrate, alcohol etc. that are really causes different types of
health
problems. If policymakers can make a law to increase the price of sugary
items
,
then
it will demotivate the
people
to eat the sugary
products
.
Consequently
, many
health
problems like diabetics, kidney damage, etc. will be decreased in the following days.
Moreover
, making
people
conscious by advertising in the media will be another effective way to discourage
people
to take more sugary
products
.
For instance
, in Bangladesh, a beverage product Coca-Cola has lost its popularity after announcing its detrimental effects on our
health
. Giving advertisements on social media
such
as Facebook, Youtube, Instagram and so on is really beneficial to give a cautious message to the community.
Thus
,
people
can be more conscious of the harmful effects of sugary
products
. To conclude, expanding the expense of sugary
items
and
people
's awareness will be an effective way to reduce the consumption of sugary
items
. It is recommended to take steps to restrict the consumption of sugary
products
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar consumption
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • encourage
  • expensive
  • reduce
  • effectively
  • discourage
  • tight budget
  • purchasing
  • disproportionately
  • lower-income individuals
  • healthier food choices
  • demand
  • regardless
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