Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? And suggest some solutions.

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In today's world ,
people
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who live in urban areas do not get enough
time
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for their fitness., we will put forward some of the reasons which create
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kind of situation
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, Urban
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like the modern lifestyle and for that, they are doing unnecessary hard work. They are unable to take out some leisure
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from their busy schedule to get relax or do some exercise. Modern men and women are too much stressed , they
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satisfied with their achievements and growth. They always want more in their life and forget about their health . As per survey in
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of India newspaper ,That the cities
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not that much fit due to
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health disease are more common in metro cities , Another cause is there is less room for urban
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to go there and do exercise cities contribute to the constructions of buildings, mall , offices and accommodation
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there is no space for
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for
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to get involved in sports activities there are several ways for urban residents to solve
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problem.
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, they should suggest the governments spend the funding parks, sidewalks and walkways which are full of various species of plants.
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,
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will find doing physical exercises enjoyable as they have a chance to be in
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relaxing places.
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, the dwellers themselves have to balance work and entertainment, so that they can comfortably play sports without concerning about the heavy workload To conclude
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,
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trend of not
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playground
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and humans’ being too busy should be resolved soon .
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, it can be solved by providing more pleasant public parks and spending less
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • desk-bound jobs
  • fast-paced urban life
  • conveniences
  • physical exertion
  • barrier
  • densely populated
  • pollution
  • safety concerns
  • urban planning
  • pedestrian areas
  • cycle lanes
  • accessible
  • workplace wellness programs
  • subsidize
  • financial barriers
  • public awareness
  • incorporate
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