Many people today are worried about the large quantities of waste produced by ordinary households. What problems are caused by household waste, and what solutions may be possible in both the short and the long term?

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plenty of
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in the society and require
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consumption
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wast products which are release from
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household
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citizens are affected by the over
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. Many citizens are not gain about knowledge to manage the
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have risk
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order to
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respiratory
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disease which is constructed by burning garbage.
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, In India , The rate of
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waste
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wast
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waste
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products is the largest amount in Asia.
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half of
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lack of pure water. which is the issue
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dirty contamination. effective methods are solved
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The government should
encorrage
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encourage
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separate
the
wast
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waste
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product and arrange
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useful activities
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are already gain awareness. The government should enact strict rules contribute to
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people
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not dare to make mistakes In conclusion, I strongly
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that
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rubbish are the various problems in the recent day and the major
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issue
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the issue
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is
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citizens
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lack information about the proper waste management.
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will
sustanable
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sustainable
development from efficacy administration from the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Sustainable packaging
  • Environmental pollution
  • Overflowing landfills
  • Recycling efforts
  • Waste segregation
  • Composting
  • Biodegradable
  • Waste-to-energy
  • Public awareness
  • Single-use plastics
  • Renewable resources
  • Toxic emissions
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Resource conservation
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