Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Owing to increasing internet speeds and easy access to

smartphones

, watching

movies

or other categories of entertainment content on

smartphones

or tablets rather than

cinema

halls

has been quite the phenomenon over the

last

decade. While a great number of the

of the

Remove the redundancy

apply

show examples

young pursues

this

recent phenomenon, there are still some

people

, including me, who zealously support the idea that watching

movies

is a collective

experience

and for the films to

fulfill

Change the spelling

fulfil

show examples

their purpose, going to the

cinema

must stay a consistent habit, particularly among both families and friends. On the one hand, the convenience of watching the latest

movies

that

smartphones

provide at the time of our choosing seems unparalleled;

for instance

, some would rather enjoy watching

movies

in the comfort of their homes since cinemas and

theaters

Change the spelling

theatres

show examples

follow a rigid plan schedule which might not suit

this

era’s hectic lifestyles.

Moreover

, there’s the cheap subscription of online streaming platforms

such

as NETFLIX which offer a variety of choices at the click of a button;

therefore

, quite a few

people

find

this

trend rewarding.

On the other hand

, there are many zealots who still feel that

movie-watching

Correct article usage

the movie-watching

show examples

experience

is best enjoyed in dark

cinema

halls

and in the company of total strangers just like the

theaters

Change the spelling

theatres

show examples

, for they believe that the

cinema

is the ideal place to

experience

the seventh art form in a collective manner;

additionally

, since the use of technology in

movies

such

as 3D is rapidly growing, it is far more fascinating to watch and enjoy

such

films in

cinema

halls

which are particularly equipped to both boost and improve

this

experience

,

hence

persuading many

people

to prefer

cinema

halls

over

smartphones

. To sum

up

Add a comma

,up

show examples

everything that has been stated so far, while many

people

believe that the practice of going to the

cinema

is getting rapidly replaced by the practice of watching

movies

on mobiles or tablets, I strongly agree with those who feel that

cinema

halls

will ultimately emerge victorious in

this

ongoing battle with

smartphones

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

if properly equipped with technology just as they did when confronted by VCRs a few decades back.