Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Owing to increasing internet speeds and easy access to

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, watching

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or other categories of entertainment content on

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or tablets rather than

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recent phenomenon, there are still some

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, including me, who zealously support the idea that watching

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is a collective

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and for the films to

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their purpose, going to the

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must stay a consistent habit, particularly among both families and friends. On the one hand, the convenience of watching the latest

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that

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provide at the time of our choosing seems unparalleled;

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, some would rather enjoy watching

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in the comfort of their homes since cinemas and

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follow a rigid plan schedule which might not suit

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era’s hectic lifestyles.

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, there’s the cheap subscription of online streaming platforms

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experience

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is best enjoyed in dark

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and in the company of total strangers just like the

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, for they believe that the

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is the ideal place to

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the seventh art form in a collective manner;

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, since the use of technology in

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as 3D is rapidly growing, it is far more fascinating to watch and enjoy

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films in

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which are particularly equipped to both boost and improve

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to prefer

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everything that has been stated so far, while many

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believe that the practice of going to the

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is getting rapidly replaced by the practice of watching

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on mobiles or tablets, I strongly agree with those who feel that

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if properly equipped with technology just as they did when confronted by VCRs a few decades back.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Convenience
Mobile Viewing
Cost-efficient
Time-efficient
Personalized experience
Immersive
Cinematic experience
Surround sound
Collective experience
Technical superiority
Sensory experience
Social hubs
Cultural events
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