Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, there is no doubt that
people
are becoming more aware of global warming and its consequences. However
, some people
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believe
belive
that rather Correct your spelling
believe
stoping
or being more cautious about climate change, we opt to find a suitable method to live with it. Personally speaking, I strongly disagree with Change preposition
than stoping
this
statement.
Others say that we should avoid fixing our planet's current state because global warming is a long-term issue that requires a lot of money to raise constant awareness and to resolve different issues, regards to this
matter. Moreover
, they think there are more vital and immediate issues that need more attention and investment than nature catastrophies
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catastrophes
catastrophic
,
since they have not seen any Remove the comma
apply
servere
effects yet. Let's not forget that, for the Correct your spelling
severe
last
two months, many Americans, especially people
who lived in Texas suffered from snowfalls, which has never happened before so many residents lost their home
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homes
,
because they never experienced Remove the comma
apply
such
events so theyr
house cannot withstand the harsh conditions. Correct your spelling
they
their
they're
This
nature phenominals
or disaster happens due to climate change.
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phenomenal
On the other hand
of this
issue, many argue that if we Correct your spelling
hesitant
hesitate
hesistant
and do not start solving Add a missing verb
are hesistant
this
problem because we might not see how serious the outcome can be, our younger generations need to suffer much more heavy consequences, which can be very difficult to control and resolve. This
is because, according to some professors and researchers that are specialised in the weather, they
said that changing of the climate is an issue Correct your spelling
the
that is
being built up Correct your spelling
over time
overtime
so it needs to be handle as soon as possible. Correct your spelling
over time
For example
, sea level rising in many Europeans
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European
coutries
or Correct your spelling
countries
costal
cities is a major Correct your spelling
coastal
problems
, since for the Change the noun form
problem
next
30 to 50 years, if we cannot construct enough dams or finding the practical solutions to control the global temperature, they
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apply
these whole area
will drown, which can lead to many serious consequent effects.
In conclusion, Change the determiner
this whole area
these whole areas
people
might say that we just need to find a way to live with the problem, but I believe that the sooner we deal with this
change, the better the outcome.Submitted by vynguyen300673 on
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