Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is no doubt that
people
are becoming more aware of global warming and its consequences.
However
, some
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that rather
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or being more cautious about climate change, we opt to find a suitable method to live with it. Personally speaking, I strongly disagree with
this
statement. Others say that we should avoid fixing our planet's current state because global warming is a long-term issue that requires a lot of money to raise constant awareness and to resolve different issues, regards to
this
matter.
Moreover
, they think there are more vital and immediate issues that need more attention and investment than nature
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since they have not seen any
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severe
effects yet. Let's not forget that, for the
last
two months, many Americans, especially
people
who lived in Texas suffered from snowfalls, which has never happened before so many residents lost their
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because they never experienced
such
events so
theyr
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they
their
they're
house cannot withstand the harsh conditions.
This
nature
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phenomenal
or disaster happens due to climate change.
On the other hand
of
this
issue, many argue that if we
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and do not start solving
this
problem because we might not see how serious the outcome can be, our younger generations need to suffer much more heavy consequences, which can be very difficult to control and resolve.
This
is because, according to some professors and researchers that are specialised in the weather,
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said that changing of the climate is an issue
that is
being built up
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over time
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overtime
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so it needs to be handle as soon as possible.
For example
, sea level rising in many
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coutries
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countries
or
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cities is a major
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, since for the
next
30 to 50 years, if we cannot construct enough dams or finding the practical solutions to control the global temperature,
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these whole area
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will drown, which can lead to many serious consequent effects. In conclusion,
people
might say that we just need to find a way to live with the problem, but I believe that the sooner we deal with
this
change, the better the outcome.
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  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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