Around the world mega cities are now home to an ever larger share of the world’s population. What problems are caused by this shift? What measures can governments take to deal with these issues?

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Nowadays, a lot of
people
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in the world move to live in the major
cities
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because it is convenient.
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essay will discuss the
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caused by
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the
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rise of
people
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in the
cities
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and possible solutions that the governments can cope with
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problem
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.
First
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of all, there are several
problems
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caused by the increasing population in the main
cities
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. One is the traffic congestion that
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people
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waste their time on roads.
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Due
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to the growth of amount
family
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families
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in the
cities
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, they have to buy a new car to use in daily life. If the
amount
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number
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of cars are
increase
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increases
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,
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it
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also
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caused
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air pollution.
That is
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why some children and old
people
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have the
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of their lungs and respiratory tracts. Another
problem
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is the
government
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cannot tackle all
problems
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in the
cities
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because they have to look after all the population. Many times they can solve
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minor
problems
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such
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as a bad smell of garbage and contaminated water in the canal.
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, there are some possible policies that the
government
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can provide to
people
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in the town.
Firstly
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, To deal with the heavy traffic, they need to encourage the
people
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to use public transport
instead
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of their own car. They can publish the new policy about the cost of using
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the public
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transport system or provide
the
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apply
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promotions .
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, the Japanese
government
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reduced the price of
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trains to attract more
people
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to use the public system and they can decrease the number of cars in main
cities
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such
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as Osaka and Tokyo.
Moreover
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, the
government
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has to create a group of assistants that can manage the minor
problem
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to cover
people
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in the
cities
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. In conclusion,
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increasing
of
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population in the major town can lead to traffic jams and ineffective ways to remove the minor
problem
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, the
government
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can publish new policies to solve these
problems
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.
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