Some people think that when recruiting companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently. While others think they should recruit people who are able to work in a team follow instructions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recruiting companies helped a lot of people's nowadays. In my opinion, both

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criteria

(work

independenty

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independently

and follow instructions) are needed when hiring a new applicant. It will be a great help to the

company

and to their career growth.

Firstly

, working independently means you can do a lot of things alone without any helped

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your colleagues because you can easily understand what you need to provide to the

company

.

For example

, working from home. Usually, you will be alone because most of your colleagues are working

also

in their own place and you can concentrate and give more ideas while thinking on your own.

On the other hand

, working in a team means you have someone to follow it's either your team leader or boss and most of them will not care about your own opinion because they may think that your idea is not enough for the

company

and you will feel useless and unhappy

that is

why you will not enjoy your life or even your work. For

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, my brother is working in a big

company

and he decided to resigned because his boss keeps on scolding him

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he got ideas that

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for their

company

. Because of that, he works hard and now decided to build a small business that he can

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his own and recently it became one of the famous

business

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in my hometown. I conclude

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both are eagerly needed when recruiting an applicant. It will

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on their respective companies on how they will treat them and listened to their opinions.