Cars have greater negative impact than positive one in our quality life style. How far do you agree with the statement?

Cars
are playing a big role in our society nowadays both positive and negative impact is recurrent in all technologies.  I am to disagree
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the statement that
cars
are resulting
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more negative effect in our life.
Cars
are continuously upgrading and evolving each year it is now essential in our daily life.
Cars
give us
convenient
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and
comfort
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. Though
cars
produce pollution
however
the technologies evolve and resolve
this
problem little by little. Urban places are one of those who will benefit the most since most of their needs is in the city side they need to travel a long distance to get their daily supplies.
Cars
give
then
the
convenient
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of travelling long distance faster
that is
why I disagree that
cars
have a
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bad effect than being useful
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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