In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience.
Health
concerns are been growing day by day in today's modern world. Folks are too busy nowadays to concentrate about
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thus
leading to physical and mental disorders. There are
a myriad of medical problems which are related to the current attitude of life. To mention are a number of solutions and will mention some of the ideas and examples supporting them in upcoming paragraphs.
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To begin
with, the primary issue associated with the harmful lifestyle is eating fast food as it is found to be more
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as diabetes, hypertension, hormonal imbalances, etc. Moreover
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Secondly
, lack of time to exercise can also
cause people
to get older before their actual biological age. Last
but not the least, lack of proper sleep due to busy routines in today's competitive world can also
be deterimental
to one's body. Correct your spelling
detrimental
For instance
, there was a famous billionaire who use to eat well, exercise but use to sleep only 3 to 4 hours a day which was the main cause for his ill health
, consequently
leading to his death.
There can be simple solutions that people
can adopt for better health
and productive life. Firstly
, society should buy and consume more of
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locally grown and produced foods, so that it can avoid consuming Correct article usage
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of
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unhealthy and adulterated food items. Correct article usage
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Also
, it is employers responsibility to fix the working hours for the staff so that they can also
focus on their health
and take out time to be physically active. Employees should practice
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Moreover
, this
method can alleviate drawbacks
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examples
, many companies are now having their personal gym and healthy food cafeteria as Fix the agreement mistake
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awareness to stay fit.
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this
is a grave topic of concern and it cannot be achieved overnight. Hence
, it requires consistency and sincere effort by being disciplined and conscious about what they are eating and also
of their routine. Nevertheless
, it is never too late to make a start and follow and also
people
must make regular checkup
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