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Some individuals think that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback to employers. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

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In
this
 day and age, some people assume that teleworking is beneficial to
employees
 but it is completely opposite to
employers
. From my perspective,
employers
 are able to take full advantage of working from home.
To begin
 with, the wire technology has opened up variety choices of up-to-date possibilities and options for workers for the purpose of remote working. By using mobile phones, tablets or computers, they can easily access different kinds of information and assist their
work
 more efficiently.
Moreover
, virtual working gives
employers
 the ability to
work
 at their own pace without being disrupted by any distractions, offline meetings. Another factor that cannot be denied is working from home is less stressful and exhausted than working at the office. Online working is
also
 another way to reduce traffic jams and exhaust fume that come from transportations. As
employers
 and
employees
 have to
work
 at home, there are
less
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 transports and smoke on the street and it is healthy for the whole community. Mobile
work
 is an exquisite choice for salaried workers who desire more income.
For instance
, various online websites can help individuals to earn money by writing comments when listening to new songs or translating passages and emails for companies.
Additionally
, disabled
employees
 choose virtual working mode because it is convenient and more comfortable for them as they cannot go to
work
as
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the way normal people do. In conclusion, we cannot deny the fact that teleworking is advantageous for both
employers
 and
employees
 and
this
 should be promoted.
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