These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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number of family immigration to other nations has attracted people’s development. Some people believe that the youngsters can be affected by

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development, while the others oppose that immigration

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a wide range of beneficial outcomes.

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will be given. On the one side of the argument, there

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why moving to other countries negatively

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reason is that the

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difficult adjustments. What

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is that the various barriers

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as the major obstacles which the immigrants need to overcome language and

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challenges. Perhaps, the clearest example of

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is that the young generations are forced to make new friends after they have moved to a new environment.

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trend eventually causes these

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from the changes, especially the slowly adaptive person.

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, the opponents may argue that living in other developed rustics totally generates various advantageous impacts towards the kids. One of the obvious

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is that the

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have a chance to

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in better educational institutions. It is commonly easy to understand that the education system in developed nations

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that of undeveloped ones. A good example of

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point is that Canada, one of the countries recognized as having

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education curriculum in the world, has equally provided education to all youths. Another compelling is that in the areas consisting of sophisticated modern technology has contributed abundant

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job opportunities with

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salary and fringe benefits, guaranteeing the adolescents to succeed in their career futures. A new generation of Thais,

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, tends to migrate themselves to industrialized nations in order to achieve a sustainable life. To conclude, it seems to me that both sides of the argument have their merits. From my perspective, I am inclined to believe that the advantages of moving to economically advanced worlds far outstrip the negative, resulting in

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plentiful positives

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as quality of life and stability in professions. If any families will require to change their settlements, advising the

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is essential to implement.