Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

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Every country in the world have different cultured and
art
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is the way to introduce the culture. In the present age, many
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ignored
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and are more focused on science, technology, and business. I think the public who ignored
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feel
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is not necessary nowadays and to make the public interested in
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, we can make
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more interactive or can make more
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from that. We can see that many
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more interesting in another thing unless the arts. In my opinion, arts can not make a
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of
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. How much
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does
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make? I am sure many communities are asking like that. I think it is about
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's perspectives and effort.
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, many parents said or gave advice to their children to study science, technology, or business because that major is more important, educative, and prestigious. So the children must have thought like that. Many populations think
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can not make a
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of
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.
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, if we thought that
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is not important, the culture of many countries can fade. We don't know about old songs, old paintings, museums, and history. I think all of
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important too. And in my opinion, the government and citizens are able to make arts more interesting.
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famous artist can promote their country to another country with their culture, language, food, and many more. So many
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think that
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can do and make a
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of
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. They provided that we can think creatively.
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, many
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think it is boring, and we can prove that it is not true and make it real. In conclusion, I think
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are not interested in
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because
art
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can not make a
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of
money
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and we can not do anything from
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. To make it more interesting, the government and citizens who love
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must work together and make something exciting and prove to who
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interested.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Economic growth
  • STEM subjects
  • Job security
  • Financial success
  • Pragmatic
  • Utilitarian pursuits
  • Art education
  • Inclusive
  • Engaging
  • Contemporary society
  • Social issues
  • Environmental themes
  • Digital platforms
  • Virtual museums
  • Interactive art
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