goverment spend a lot of money on public celebration such as national holiday and public festiwal.some people say that government must spend money on other useful things. Do you agree or disagree

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worldwide growth of the nation depends upon

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of

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by the government on several sectors.In the modern era , higher authorities huge amount of

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on public celebrations

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as historic holidays and

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.some individuals think that

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must spend

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on other things

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as

medical

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field and

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. I completely agree with

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statement and the

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point will be discussed in the following paragraph. To embark upon , let us unfurling some reasons, why government pay attention to spend cash on useful things.

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and foremost , when hospitals of any nation

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not enough source and facilities ,

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they can not able to decrease the death rate in

a difficult situations

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.

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, in march 2020 when the corona pandemic

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, there was a shortage of ventilators in India , if

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may spend

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essential equipment

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hospital

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do not face difficulties in a medical emergency.

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, in some area sportsman do have not a large source and

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essential

sports

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kits.

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, they can not focus on their game full of dedication.If government spend funds to hire a good coach

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any team will win important games.

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, in the 2020-21 Olympic games India won only one gold medal if leadership focus on how to increase

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number and give huge

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to

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organisation

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then

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results could be changed.

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, sometimes higher authorities spend large

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to celebrate historical

festival

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festivals

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and holidays.

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, management arranges a program on the big level to

national

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holiday and spend valuable

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on decoration.

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, on 15 Aug the number of events are organised related to independence day by the executive.

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, when any kind of festival

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the ministry expends cash to celebrate it on a national level. To conclude ,

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it is essential to celebrate

national

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the national

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and public

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because people remain in touch with culture and past history

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if council pay out

money

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to improve the medical condition and

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facilities

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it will help to enhance the growth of a nation