Crime is becoming serious concern. Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime. While other feel that little action can be done to stop crime.

At present

crime

is a major issue in our

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society

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stop

this

, some

people

believe

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extreme

action

should be taken.

Although

others think it can be solved by minor

action

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will discuss,

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of

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extreme

and minor

crime

.

Firstly

, I will explore why

people

feel for cime

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extreme

action

should take and

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secondly

I will discuss why some

people

believe

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is enough

for

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stop

this

.

Crime

is a common issue in many counties. The rate of

crime

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day by day. To stop

this

,

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some

person

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people

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think

extrime

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extreme

punishment

should take because without heavy

action

it will be rise significantly.

For example

, in many countries rape is a common

crime

. But court and police could not take proper

action

. For

this

reason,

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rapist

get motivation for did these

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of

crime

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crime

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they protest these

type

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types

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of

crime

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crimes

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by

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extreme

punishment

. Like,In Saudi

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if any person did rape the government will be

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destroy

his or her sex power. So by

this

type

of

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extreme

punishment

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crime

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the cime

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rate

automatecally

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automatically

decreased. On the

hand

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sometimes it

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negative

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a negative

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impact

also

.

On the other hand

, others believe little

punishment

can be effective for solve

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problem

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. Because it

is works

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as

a

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motivation and sometimes it can

be change

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crimal carrier.

For example

, for minor

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criminal

like

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a thief

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thief

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thieves

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. Most of the time these

type

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of

criminal

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criminals

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did these because of drug addiction. So it is possible to solve by

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arrange

seminar about bad effect of

these

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this crime

these crimes

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crime

. Another

things

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is

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, at

prison

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most of the

criminal

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criminals

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realise they did

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a mistake

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mistake

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. So some

people

believe,

court

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the court

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should give reasonable

punishment

because they believe in future

these criminal

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this criminal

these criminals

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will be a good

person

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people

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. In conclusion,

crime

has a great negative impact

in

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on

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socity

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society

. Many

people

think proper

action

is the only way

for

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overcome

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from

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these problem

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, but others

also

think

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reasonable

punishment

is more

value

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. In my opinion,

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balanced

punishment

it

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a good way to overcome

from

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crime