The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The two pictures compare the developments which took place in Grange
park
between 1920 and today. Regarding the given maps, it is obvious that the
park
has witnessed dramatic changes since 1920. From the maps, we can argue that all of the parts in
park
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were knocked down and replaced by a new part except the two main entrances from Eldon street and Arnold avenue and one of the rose gardens. The most noticeable change was demolishing the fountain and giving way to a square shape rose garden in the
center
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of the
park
with lots of seats
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side. The music stage
also
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developed and reconstructed as an Amphitheatre for concerts. For the convenience of visitors, a new underground car
park
is constructed with an entrance on the west side of the
park
. A play area is
also
included for children to provide leisure for both children and adults at one place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recreational facilities
  • landscaping
  • naturalistic
  • amenities
  • formal gardens
  • ergonomic
  • symmetric designs
  • inclusive
  • accessible
  • accommodations
  • native plant species
  • societal changes
  • visitor services
  • community events
  • evolution
  • modern playgrounds
  • wildflower meadows
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