Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Globalisation has overruled the market in
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era. A section of society opines to go for domestic merchandise
however
another set of general masses desires multinational production.
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agress
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agrees
agree
With the above nation and the points will be bolstered in upcoming paragraphs. To kick the discussion there exists innumerate reasons in regards to
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a preference
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for local items.
Initially
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products
designed within the country
adds
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up to
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the GDP
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of a particular country. Spending on domestic
products
has proven to be one of the prominent
source
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sources
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of national income. To elaborate rise in demand for local
manufactur
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manufacture
will undoubtedly
leads
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to the economic growth of country
secondly
, native
products
have always been cheaper as compared to
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an international
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one.
Cause
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behind
this
is exclusion from international taxes.
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cost of shoes of
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is much
more
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higher than the cost of Australian made footwear.
On the contrary
, people who have been more inclined towards
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the global
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market
,
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nevertheless
desires
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to pay
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an extra
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penny as
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the price
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for these items Hits the market.
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,
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society has reached
as
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its climax about social status acquiring branded
good
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goods
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is supposed to be a symbol of prestige for
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a major
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part of
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the community
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.
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wearables with the tag of brand PUMA or ADIDAS signatures up the financial status of a person.
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, people have
belief
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a belief
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that imported merchandise
are
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is
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quality oriented
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.
For
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unlike locally manufactured electric gadgets, people
grabs
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on apple
products
. All in all, to recapitulate it can be said both sides have
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pros and cons. As per my
opiniom
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opinion
acquisition of
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goods
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or services should be unbiased from
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views.
However
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it
sholud
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should
lie on purchasing power plus
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a preference
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of
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the rational
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consumer
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • sustainability
  • longevity
  • affordability
  • consumerism
  • waste
  • environmental impact
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  • customer satisfaction
  • brand loyalty
  • consumption
  • economic growth
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