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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #climate #change
Some
people
 believe that we should learn
to
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how to live in
the
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an
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 environment
that
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the
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climate
 is changing rather than preventing it.
However
, I totally disagree with
this
 view.
Actually
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climate
change
 is caused by humans, so
people
 have the responsibility to recover it. The increase of carbon dioxide is the reason why
climate
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the climate
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 is becoming warmer. On the one hand, the exhaust from vehicles on the road and emissions from factories are the source of carbon dioxide.
On the other hand
,
People
 cut more and more forests as well as plant
less
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 trees, leading to less carbon dioxide can be absorbed by green plants. The planet is the common home for all creatures not just for humans,
people
 are supposed to offset mistakes they have made. Many animals cannot survive
such
a
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warm weather and become extinct, so
people
 should take efforts to save these animals. As
climate
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 is becoming more extreme, it is difficult to find a way to live in
such
environment
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 while it is easier to take measures to prevent it.
First
 of all,
climate
change
 will lead to many serious disasters that humans have no power to prevent. As
climate
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 becomes warmer, ice packs are melting increasingly, which leads to the rise of water
level
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levels
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. In
this
 way, flooding is more and more frequent now, and
people
 lose their homes and family when flooding comes.
Second
, there are many measures
can
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 be taken to prevent
climate
change
, from governments to individuals. Governments can introduce laws to restrict the number of vehicles and promote “ green taxes” on factories. Individuals can take public transportation
instead
 of driving their own cars. In conclusion, it seems to me that
people
 should make every effort to prevent
climate
change
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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