The mass production of cars has revolutionised the way people live and work. What alternatives to cars might there be? How will these changes in transport effect our working and private lives? Will cars still be vital in the near future?

Nowadays,
cars
can transform people's behaviour and work.
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what other options that you can select rather than
car
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. How can it
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effect
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on
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transport in our
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or working and Is it important in the
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First
of all, there are several changes of the main resources of power that make the
car
moving.
Theseday
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These day
, We have electric
cars
that can replace fossil fuel
cars
.
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cars
have to charge the batteries by using electric current.
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,
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cars
can harvest pure energy from the sunlight and transform
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electric energy.
For instance
, Tesla produces electric
cars
that can keep
electric
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in a battery and
this
new technology that uses only electricity is popular worldwide.
Moreover
, It has the incredible function
"self-driving"
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it can select
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destination and
then
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control
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car
and the artificial intelligence will drive the
car
to the destination. All these changes will affect our lives and activities. The main effect is that
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is more convenient than the previous
cars
because it is fast to go to your destination and the technologies are quite accurate by using AI to calculate and analyse the road.
For example
, It has a function that can analyse the fastest way to the final place and it saves you
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time from traffic congestion so that you can spend your time on other activities or work.
Furthermore
, It is safer than the old transportation because the AI can calculate the safe distance that will lessen accidents on the road. In conclusion, I believe that the
car
will not disappear and remain necessary but it will improve electric
cars
since it is convenient and precise by using AI programs, it will decrease the number of
car
accidents.
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