The mass production of cars has revolutionised the way people live and work. What alternatives to cars might there be? How will these changes in transport effect our working and private lives? Will cars still be vital in the near future?
Nowadays,
cars
can transform people's behaviour and work. This
essay will discuss about
what other options that you can select rather than Remove the preposition
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car
. How can it Add an article
the car
a car
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affect
effect
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affect
on
transport in our Change preposition
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live
or working and Is it important in the Replace the word
life
next
decade.
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First
of all, there are several changes of the main resources of power that make the car
moving. Theseday
, We have electric Correct your spelling
These day
cars
that can replace fossil fuel cars
. This
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These
cars
have to charge the batteries by using electric current. Also
, the
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cars
can harvest pure energy from the sunlight and transform Correct pronoun usage
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electric energy. Change preposition
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For instance
, Tesla produces electric cars
that can keep electric
in a battery and Replace the word
electricity
this
new technology that uses only electricity is popular worldwide. Moreover
, It has the incredible function "self-driving"
it can select Change preposition
of "self-driving"
you
destination and Change the pronoun
your
then
you need not to
control Remove the word
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you
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your
car
and the artificial intelligence will drive the car
to the destination.
All these changes will affect our lives and activities. The main effect is that self driving
is more convenient than the previous Add a hyphen
self-driving
cars
because it is fast to go to your destination and the technologies are quite accurate by using AI to calculate and analyse the road. For example
, It has a function that can analyse the fastest way to the final place and it saves you the
time from traffic congestion so that you can spend your time on other activities or work. Correct article usage
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Furthermore
, It is safer than the old transportation because the AI can calculate the safe distance that will lessen accidents on the road.
In conclusion, I believe that the car
will not disappear and remain necessary but it will improve electric cars
since it is convenient and precise by using AI programs, it will decrease the number of car
accidents.Submitted by Marker & Kaohom
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