Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Modification is essential for everyone in performing the day to day activities but many consider spending their
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carrying out similar tasks on a daily and restrain from change. In my opinion, I prefer
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I will discuss both aspects in the following paragraphs. Many ought to stabilize their
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by sticking to
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particular task for a long period of time. In
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, people consider working in the same job constantly in order to avoid losing their position as an employer, manager and other roles. Thereby, restricting themselves from a variety of new opportunities that might be awaiting on their way.
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is only satisfied enough with what they have and do not bother undertaking new risks,
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, from being an employee to commencing a new business of their own.
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, changes in
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are vital, even though
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may not see the benefits to it.
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a wide range of new opportunities and skills to learn from and explore many other various talents
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has.
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, leaving
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's comfort zone to participate in a numerous number of activities leads to growth and overcome the impossible, whereby taking on challenges and risks develops
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's state of fear into becoming the
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is daunting, challenges shape up the
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of people and promote steady growth. In conclusion, I believe that change is essential due to the different opportunities and skills that exist today for
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to climb in the field of success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • stagnation
  • routine
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • specialization
  • innate
  • personal growth
  • adaptability
  • fast-paced
  • new horizons
  • equilibrium
  • progress
  • dynamic
  • transformation
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