The crime rate nawadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

In the past criminal was so high, but in recent

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the advanced

technology

able to fix

this

problem with many methods. I firmly agree that high

technology

can

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the crime rate in the future.

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will be a good helper to the police. In

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some examples in my opinion.

To begin

with, criminal in the past without CCTV was hard for policemen.

For instance

, when you doing something wrong with far from other sights in 30 years ago, so they don't have any evidence to prove and take you to jail, but

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era we can prove that from CCTV in the shopping mall or street or restaurants.

As a result

, did something wrong will be caught by CCTV forever.

Secondly

, terrorists across the countries are easier to find than in the past. The reason why

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technology

links the

world

,

for

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they have some programme to track the terrorist if they escaping from country to country,

this

will help while they entering to new places as information will send to immigration to aware

this

person with red light.

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,

this

will hard to escape than the past from

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information links.

Finally

, normal

technology

such

as social media or communication apps

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also

save the

world

.

For instance

, Twitter or Facebook

this

both

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number of users in the

world

,

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will help to spread

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vital information to the police. Because of

this

just daily life applications but much helpful. In conclusion,

technology

has come to help people not only in criminal but,

this

also

makes people life easier than in the past. I think in the future will be more influences

to

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human life.