You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. You want to find out more about these lessons. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. . Describe how well you can swim at the moment . Explain why you want to learn to swim better . Enquire about the time and cost of the swimming lessons
Dear
Mr.
Brown,
I am writing to you in regard to the advertisement published in the newspapers concerning the swimming classes at your centre.
As an average swimmer, I am capable of the basic front crawl technique. Change the punctuation
Mr
In addition
to this
, I have the ability to hold my breathe
Replace the word
breath
under water
for an acceptable period of time.
Due to the medical Correct your spelling
underwater
problem
I am suffering from in my left shoulder and elbow, I would like to ameliorate my swimming practice.
According to my physician, Add a comma
,problem
this
activity is the safest type of sport that I can practice without hurting my arm.
As it reduces pain and prevents further
complications, it is highly recommended in my case.
Beacause
of the reasons mentioned above, I would really appreciate Correct your spelling
Because
if
you could provide me with the time and cost of the lessons.
I would be very grateful if you could answer me as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Nahla Badr.Correct pronoun usage
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.