In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I don’t agree that a developed nation should pay for the healthcare

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of its

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population, as

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will lead to bankruptcy for that nation. Even though there are many advantages to providing free

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for every citizen,

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as protecting the

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of poor

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, the current

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system is too expensive to provide it without charge to everyone as they grow old in the future. As

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become more highly developed in their economies and social support systems, families have fewer children and the population as a whole begins to age. There is an economic reason for

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trend, in that rural and

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economies require a lot of farm or factory labour, and having many children can prove to be an economic advantage as their wages often contribute to their family’s wealth. Because these

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have lower GDP’s, they can only afford basic

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services for their

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, and whether it is free or requires payment, there is usually a sufficient base of productive workers who are earning money and paying taxes to pay for their

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systems. The problem lies with developed

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whose

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systems are more technologically complex and whose personnel are more highly trained and paid.

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leads to a prohibitively expensive

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system in these developed

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with low birthrates and a much smaller pool of workers paying taxes to pay for the

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of large numbers of aged

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who are retired and not contributing to the tax base. In

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situation, the country will soon find healthcare costs spiralling out of control while at the same time the number of workers paying taxes decreases.

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, older

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usually have more

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problems and longer hospital stays, which only compounds the entire problem for rich

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with

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populations. The obvious solution to

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problem is to reduce the need for a

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system in the

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place. Many poor and underdeveloped

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don’t have many western-style hospitals because they have

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healers who use herbal remedies and therapies that they can afford. The overall

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of these nations, as long as they are not at war or suffering from a natural disaster, is often better than that of developed

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when counting rates of cancer, heart disease, which are the leading causes of death in the developed world.

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be attributed to a less polluted environment in these mostly pre-industrial societies, as well as healthier diets and more physical activity. Industrial societies could practice preventative medicine, including eliminating

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and encouraging physical fitness, to increase the

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of their populations and achieve savings.

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, if developed

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returned to natural healing and remedies

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of technological ones they could greatly reduce the costs involved and easily afford to provide free

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for everyone.