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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problem as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

#people #exercise #time #health
Even though health is
bieng
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being
 is considered as an important factor by many people nowadays. Most of them are not able to shift their focus on leading a healthy life due to
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job responsibilities. The major reason here is the type of
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 folks are involved in.
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 of
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these days
 are working from home due to the ongoing pandemic, which
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 in turn made them lethargic and unhealthy. There are various factors
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 could account
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 being devoid of any exercise. They
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work
 from home, anxiety issues, confining to a comfort zone,
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laziness
 and so on.
This
 scenario has been boosted with the oncoming of Covid19, whereby
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 have been confined to their location and thereby have reduced their commute.
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this
 has induced them in becoming lazy and
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 developed unhealthy eating habits. Though there are issues concerning
this
. There seems to be available possible solution to
this
, many
organisation
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 have come up with the idea of inculcating free online yoga classes, exercises,
gym
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 which employees can practise at their own location without having to go out. Adding to
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, events are being organised to encourage healthy eating habits amongst the people.
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Altogether
such
 motivation incubated into the workplace by the firms can enhance the lifecycle of an individual totally. To conclude,
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even though
work
 pressure seems to mount and create imbalanced
work life
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 balance. Certain innovative steps taken by
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individual
individuals
 and
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companies can create a positive impact on
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 of a person as a whole.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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