Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).

n various nations around the world, many
people
suggest that high school pupils should take part in
the
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unpaid
community
services
,
for example
, working for a charity, improving
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the
neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. It is undeniable that the young children who make a contribution to the
community
are highly respect
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and admired by
the
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society. In
this
essay,
i
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will evaluate the several
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why
community
services
should be carried out by the youth. There are a great number of doing charity to the society, especially the program is carried out by the young generation. One of the most significant is they can build
the
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interpersonal skills among themselves.
This
is because the majority of youth nowadays are engaging with their gadget throughout the day and night, so, there is no space for them to interact with others. By launching
an unpaid
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community
services
, they can directly learn
the
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social skills,
for instance
,
tolerate
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, discipline, partnership and so many.
As a result
,
these activity
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will
mold
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them to become a wide picture
thinker
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in the future.
In addition
, they will understand the value of
money
and
meaning
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of happiness in
live
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. Admittedly
money
can't buy happiness,
however
, without
money
people
will
be suffer
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for
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survive
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.
Nevertheless
, not every single thing can be defined by
money
.
For example
, give priority to the
disabilities
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people
in the queue, help old
people
crossed the road, or help old
people
carry their stuff, these actions can actually make that person happy for the whole day.
As a result
, they will realize that provides
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services
to the public is worthy.
Moreover
, moral values can be implanted
to
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them
in
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the
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early young age,
this
is
an
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extremely
benefits
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to the person as well as society.
This
is because a person with
a
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good conduct
are
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highly
preferable
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by the employer as well as colleagues, so the chance to get employed is high. Undoubtedly every
people
likes to mingle with
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positive
people
as compared to negative
people
, so these categories of
people
will be likeable by the public and
brings
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the
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others joy.
As a result
, their life will be
happily
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and less stressful. To sum up,
i
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strongly agree that unpaid
community
services
should be conducted by the young generation in order for them to release the mercy of the world as well as bring the country to prosperity.
Besides
that, the standard of living
also
will be increased
accordingly
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • unpaid community service
  • compulsory part
  • high school programs
  • sense of duty
  • social responsibility
  • essential life skills
  • teamwork
  • communication
  • leadership
  • work experience
  • employable
  • community improvement
  • local community
  • time management
  • empathy
  • compassionate attitude
  • diversion from academics
  • critics argue
  • varying quality
  • inconsistency
  • students’ experiences
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