Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring bout a change. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Whether or not the repercussions from human hands, affecting both flora and fauna and animals, can be tackled is an
issue
of interest. Some believe that it can neither Use synonyms
development
nor Replace the word
develop
change
by those, Use synonyms
other
argue that there are solutions Correct pronoun usage
others
in
any Change preposition
to
issue
. Use synonyms
This
essay points out the rationales behind the viewpoints before the conclusion is reached which the latter should be prioritized.
On the one hand, the negative effects of humans on living Linking Words
creature
are far more difficult to be solved. Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
For instance
, the contaminated water, caused by releasing hazardous waste from many industries to natural waters, was found impossible to have Linking Words
such
solutions to bring Linking Words
the
nature back again from the aforementioned action. Correct article usage
apply
Consequently
, the illustrated problem directly correlates with the water creatures Linking Words
such
as small fish, which if they receive water by respiration process, those will obtain those poisonous particles from that and Linking Words
then
will be delivered to Linking Words
human
body by digestion due to food chain. Add an article
the human
Therefore
, it is Linking Words
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to Replace the word
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change
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such
an extent.
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to such
On the other hand
, Linking Words
although
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this
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issue
is far more difficult to be changed, it can actually be altered by limited those causes that happened on daily basis. Use synonyms
This
is due to the fact that the small development will attribute to big advancement in the future. Linking Words
For example
, if the government regulate the forbidden of Linking Words
private
car, Add an article
a private
the private
this
will contribute to not only the reduction of carbon dioxide emission, being one of the major factors of climate Linking Words
change
, but Use synonyms
also
the redevelopment of Linking Words
environment
as well. Add an article
the environment
an environment
Moreover
, the co-operative between Linking Words
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and authorities will definitely lead to Fix the agreement mistake
entrepreneurs
sustainably
solutions in nearby future.
In conclusion, I personally believe that despite Correct your spelling
sustainable
acquired
small Add an article
the acquired
change
, it is vital for people to put Use synonyms
the
hands on Change the word
their
this
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issue
in order to bring about long-run development for Use synonyms
this
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issue
. Both individuals and government should, Use synonyms
therefore
, be responsible to Linking Words
such
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