Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring bout a change. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Whether or not the repercussions from human hands, affecting both flora and fauna and animals, can be tackled is an
issue
of interest. Some believe that it can neither
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nor
change
by those,
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argue that there are solutions
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any
issue
.
This
essay points out the rationales behind the viewpoints before the conclusion is reached which the latter should be prioritized. On the one hand, the negative effects of humans on living
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are far more difficult to be solved.
For instance
, the contaminated water, caused by releasing hazardous waste from many industries to natural waters, was found impossible to have
such
solutions to bring
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nature back again from the aforementioned action.
Consequently
, the illustrated problem directly correlates with the water creatures
such
as small fish, which if they receive water by respiration process, those will obtain those poisonous particles from that and
then
will be delivered to
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body by digestion due to food chain.
Therefore
, it is
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to
change
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an extent.
On the other hand
,
although
this
issue
is far more difficult to be changed, it can actually be altered by limited those causes that happened on daily basis.
This
is due to the fact that the small development will attribute to big advancement in the future.
For example
, if the government regulate the forbidden of
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a private
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car,
this
will contribute to not only the reduction of carbon dioxide emission, being one of the major factors of climate
change
, but
also
the redevelopment of
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as well.
Moreover
, the co-operative between
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and authorities will definitely lead to
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solutions in nearby future. In conclusion, I personally believe that despite
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small
change
, it is vital for people to put
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hands on
this
issue
in order to bring about long-run development for
this
issue
. Both individuals and government should,
therefore
, be responsible to
such
an extent together.
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