The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree.

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At present, the entire world completely depends on technology and people started to fulfil their needs by purchasing over the internet.Online sales are rapidly spreading throughout the industries especially during
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pandemic situation.
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can not be replaced with the actual shopping experience and I disagree with the statement that online shopping will lead to close all shops. It is true that society compels
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purchase daily needs fashion items, furniture online and they have to just use an electronic card to make the payment.
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you can get the
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delivered to your doorstep especially when there is a life-threatened virus spread across the world.
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, you can find a vast range of options for the same
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and you can compare view reviews before making the decision. As an example, if you want to buy a mobile phone, you can simply find all the dealers in the town and compare their prices on the internet. Due to
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high competition, you might be able to purchase the
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with an online exclusive discount too.
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hassle-free shopping method has now become so popular among people.
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, Purchasing online
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has its own limitations and drawbacks too. Since everything happens virtually, you can never feel the actual shopping experience which can be gain in a shopping mall when you spend time at your computer.
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, the potential of getting a quality
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or the correct size which you want is difficult when you shop online. For an instance, if you want a suit to be done, and if you provide your size chart online, the possibility of getting a perfect suit is less, unless you physically visit the store and have a trial.
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, it is not capable of moving to operate shops completely online in near future. To conclude, It is agreed, that the growth of e-shopping is a positive market trend.
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it is impossible to be agreed that the market will completely be converted to an e-store since there are enormous experiences which you can only gain when you physically when for shopping in a town.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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