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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

#countries #people #development
During
this
 life cycle, everyone wishes to enjoy 'me time' at
certain
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period
 of
age
. But, unfortunately, most humans are blessed to have that only at old
age
.
Moreover
, some
people
 love to be in loneliness irrespective of
age
.
However
, according to my
opinion
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 it is a negative thought. In
this
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 I will examine the topic in detail with relevant examples.
To begin
 with, a set of persons like to have a break sometimes to enjoy their life being alone and
this
 attitude is completely acceptable
,
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 because the
people
 can be more creative when they are alone.
Moreover
, being single can be more productive and innovative. to exemplify,If we
looks
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 back to
the
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history it is proven that,
self experiments
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 were succeeded more than
the
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group one. To summarize,
people
 can be alone for a short
period
 to accomplish a task.
On the contrary
,in the current era, more old
age
people
 are liking to live alone and it is trending worldwide. But
this
 nature of sixty plus humans
are
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 extremely wrong because, if something happens to them suddenly they may fail to seek immediate attention.
Moreover
, being alone for a long
period
 can cause emotional imbalances and may lead to depression sometimes.
In addition
, some other category
people
, those who lost their loved ones,
also
 prefer to be alone for
rest
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 of their life without understanding the difficulties of being alone in some situations. To summarize, long term loneliness can cause psychological issues to
human
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. To conclude, my opinion is staying in a crowd can bring happiness always. Since
,
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 humans are
the
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social animal, we can not
left
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 alone for a long time. So
i
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 submit that being single for
prolonged
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a prolonged
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period
 is
a
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 worst development.
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