In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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During
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life cycle, everyone wishes to enjoy 'me time' at
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of
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. But, unfortunately, most humans are blessed to have that only at old
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, some
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love to be in loneliness irrespective of
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.
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, according to my
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it is a negative thought. In
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with, a set of persons like to have a break sometimes to enjoy their life being alone and
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attitude is completely acceptable
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because the
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can be more creative when they are alone.
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, being single can be more productive and innovative. to exemplify,If we
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back to
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history it is proven that,
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were succeeded more than
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group one. To summarize,
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can be alone for a short
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to accomplish a task.
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,in the current era, more old
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people
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are liking to live alone and it is trending worldwide. But
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nature of sixty plus humans
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extremely wrong because, if something happens to them suddenly they may fail to seek immediate attention.
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, being alone for a long
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can cause emotional imbalances and may lead to depression sometimes.
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, some other category
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, those who lost their loved ones,
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prefer to be alone for
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of their life without understanding the difficulties of being alone in some situations. To summarize, long term loneliness can cause psychological issues to
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. To conclude, my opinion is staying in a crowd can bring happiness always. Since
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humans are
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social animal, we can not
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alone for a long time. So
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submit that being single for
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a prolonged
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period
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is
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worst development.
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