More and more companies are allowing employees to work from home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Humans like to socialize more rather than being alone and
working
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environment is the right platform for
this
. If any pandemic situation demands
work
from
home
can be advisable but not for long because
,
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it can affect the person both physically and mentally.
However
, doing
job
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the job
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from house has some merits
also
, the demerits surpass
this
.
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essay will examine the topic in detail by providing relevant examples.
To begin
with, the main
benefits
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benefit
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of
work
from
home
is, the person can escape from commuting.
Second
, people can
work
according to their schedule without any supervision. The
last
and important one is persons may get relaxation time for themselves.
For example
, if someone who decided to do his job from, where he stays can perform his tasks by taking his own time.
Moreover
, he will not be worried about getting up in
early
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the early
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morning to rush to
office
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and he
do
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not even want to face the traffic jam anymore.
On the contrary
, there are some cons
also
. Being a social
animal
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animals
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humans can not be
sit
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in the same place for a long time without interacting with friends or
colligues
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colleagues
. Apart from
this
, working in family surrounding may
cause
more distractions.
In addition
to
this
, people can be
more lazy
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if they
stays
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at
home
continuously and
moreover
it can affect their health negatively. To exemplify, inactiveness can
cause
obesity and some other long term medical conditions
also
. Perhaps, it can
also
cause
some psychological issues because of social
withdrawl
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withdrawal
, like depression. To sum up, working from
home
for
short
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the short
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term can be appreciable but someone decided to
work
for
long
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term means it can
cause
many issues. So, according to
me
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, it is a negative development.
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